No Goodbye Eyes...recalling a memory

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Open Poetry #27

No Goodbye Eyes...recalling a memory

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-24 05:50 PM

No *Goodbye Eyes*

When the darkness of the night pulls
the moonlight into gold,
I'm torn between the innocence
of words trapped in my hold.

Reflections of my heart wants
the images of love,
a dreamstate to adhere to
created from above.

As time streams, past and futures
and rainbows hue my days,
the grays and shades of darkness,
on whispered winds will stray.

They take me to another land
blending me in light,
allowing mirrored thoughts of you
to softly kiss, in spite.

Naked passions, here in rest
viewed shadows, next on wall.
Reaching out to touch your shape,
laced open for your call.

Your eyes of deep, unmeasured, pierce
sigh me to their meet
as silkened paleness, overcomes
my dreams on satin sheet.

No goodbye eyes remain in mind,
just those when moments show
the loving looks that etched my heart,
and stay, while you must go.

~~*~~

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-24-2003 05:51 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-07-24 06:23 PM

No goodbye eyes remain in mind,
just those when moments show
the loving looks that etched my heart,
and stay, while you must go

Lovely Maureen...sad, but lovely. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-24 07:09 PM

Your eyes of deep, unmeasured, pierce
sigh me to their meet
as silkened paleness, overcomes
my dreams on satin sheet.

No goodbye eyes remain in mind,
just those when moments show
the loving looks that etched my heart,
and stay, while you must go.

Maureen, though this is sad, it still
has the beauty of love in it.

Hugs

Ethel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-07-24 07:23 PM

sometimes my life is sad, with just a touch of lovely in it...I'll settle for that for now.
hugs
M

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2003-07-24 07:37 PM

I've always loved your poems, another great one.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-07-25 03:49 PM

Nice...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-07-25 04:02 PM

A sad but gentle write...

Warm hugs,
EA

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