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Childs Thunderstorm
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Childs Thunderstorm |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Flash of electric blue lightening looks terific, but dangerous it can be once it's set free, to frighten small children. Quickly cover yourself up nand hide away, it wont be long before it's gone to stay. But listen...! Whats that noise? Like a river runing on your roof. It's the sound of rain, tiny ripples of sound, that runs down the tiles,and off the window, and falls as droplets to the ground. The thunder rumbles back again as the rain lashes down, the flashes continue, as you hide under your bedsheets of down. The ripples get louder, the running water is now a torrent,clinking down the tiles, as the storm rages on and into the night, encompasing houses for miles. Then all of a sudden the nightmare has passed into the blackness, and moved off to some distant town,for other children to witness. The nightmare has gone away now and you can go to sleep, and dream of the sunny weather to come...! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
We've been having thunderstorms every night...I actually love them, they clean the air when done...and usually relieve me of a headache, warning me of their coming  Maureen |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You are very versitle and talented my love...this was a great poem about thunderstorms...very descriptive..scary yet gentle at the end! loved it! xxx Love Your Vermilion Queen |
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