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Open Poetry #27

I would fix it-senryu

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-23 12:27 PM

She suffers, her pain
becomes mine, I would fix it
Would she let me in...

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-07-23 12:37 PM

Such few words, but speaks volumes.It's hard to say but if you love her you'll wait to see.Hope she let's you in.
anghelblueyes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-23 12:37 PM

Fantastic jason I know this too goddamn well but then I'm sure there's a few people thinking the same about me..

Stupid humans

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-23 12:48 PM

I understand you.
I wish there were some way to overcome
lonliness.
Wait..
It's Jesus.

Jai

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-23 12:54 PM

Jesus the christ or Jesus the dude who tried to sell me speakers in the parking lot?

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-23-2003 01:48 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-23 05:09 AM

lol@Raph

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-23 05:11 AM

Jason, a perfect senryu, you know I love those

who could decline to let you in after such a confident and powerful statement?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-07-24 10:16 PM

ahahahahaha your reading my mind
Jason . . . amazing I cant write these
for (edited by me).
xxoo

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