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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-23 12:27 PM


She suffers, her pain
becomes mine, I would fix it
Would she let me in...

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-07-23 12:37 PM


Such few words, but speaks volumes.It's hard to say but if you love her you'll wait to see.Hope she let's you in.
anghelblueyes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-07-23 12:37 PM


Fantastic jason I know this too goddamn well but then I'm sure there's a few people thinking the same about me..

Stupid humans

JaiOfHeaven
Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
3 posted 2003-07-23 12:48 PM


I understand you.
I wish there were some way to overcome
lonliness.
Wait..
It's Jesus.

Jai

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-07-23 12:54 PM


Jesus the christ or Jesus the dude who tried to sell me speakers in the parking lot?

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-23-2003 01:48 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-07-23 05:09 AM


lol@Raph


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-07-23 05:11 AM


Jason, a perfect senryu, you know I love those

who could decline to let you in after such a confident and powerful statement?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-07-24 10:16 PM


ahahahahaha your reading my mind
Jason . . . amazing I cant write these
for (edited by me).
xxoo  

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