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Lost in my world
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Lost in my world |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I sit alone among a hundred others Casting eyes downward far below Pondering a million to do’s Not focusing on one Clouds torment me as they pass by Puffy white and shallow Teasing me to float among them Blue patches entwined A rollercoaster ride I watch as the ice tinkles in my glass Treating to spill But not a drop wasted Eyes closed my lover awaits me I rise and sigh Thinking only Of the next stolen kiss |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Each stolen kiss keeps you wanting for more.Nicely done. angelblueyes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what could we do, when the best ones, are stolen.........do we not allow ourselves the gift? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grinning at the inked one...hehehehe It's nice to have her here, ya know?! What a wonderful outpour of restlessness. You are quite accomplished in your craft poet. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sensual write I've missed reading you |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 you are expanding, next the painting on the beach, okiedokiepokie |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Angelblueyes- Thanks for the kind words, Appreciated Inked- Always nice to hear from you....painting on the beach, not yet TD- what can I say! Passing Shadows- Thanks for noticing I havent posted in a while Tim- Thanks for the comments Gives me inspiration to keep the postings flowing |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
BB, I really liked this. This part here is so dreamy feeling, though a restless dream. Clouds torment me as they pass by Puffy white and shallow Teasing me to float among them Blue patches entwined Hugs to you  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel quoted the very same passage as I was about to!  Warm hugs, EA |
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