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Open Poetry #27

Tan

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-22 08:05 PM

I'm
sitting in
the sun.

sun

bathing

Tame my
white.
You can't

tame
me.

You can't
blame

me
for wanting
a little

color.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-22 08:07 PM

Kaoru - a little color is good, watch out for the red though...

BC

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-07-22 09:24 PM

Nope can't blame you, though I wish I was sitting in the summer sun right now.. sun bathing.

Enjoyed.

Maree

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-07-22 09:28 PM

Color is good and so is the sun. Although I'd like just a little coolness..hehehhe Nicely done.
angelblueyes

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-22 11:41 PM

Never mind the taming stay wild, you want colour that's what hair and fingernails ar for grin

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-07-23 12:04 PM

Nope, can't tame you, or blame you.

nice write.

Jason

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-07-23 12:13 PM

Good poem; dangerous practice.

No, can't blame you for wanting to feel better about being alive. *grin*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-07-23 12:23 PM

Will there be a tan line...James

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

8 posted 2003-07-23 12:30 PM

Tan lines are awkwardly cute to me.
*shrugs* The poem had
a sweet rhythm...
made me wanna rap it.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

9 posted 2003-07-23 01:04 AM

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