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Lipstick on the Mirror
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Lipstick on the Mirror |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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emptiness has over spilled in rooms that had fullness silence has replaced the songs that filled within these walls scents of stagnates replace the bouquets of you dust has covered the goodbye you lipsticked on the mirror your coffee cup has remained unfilled sitting alone along side the letter you left the porch swing hangs without motion that overlooks the flower bed now filled with weeds news papers cover the driveway with mail bulging from the box the remembrances of you still casts shadows that linger within the place we shared together A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (07-18-2003 05:08 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very sad and lonely this feels. Very well written ...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lives entwined can be agony in the unravel. Emotions expressed so clearly here. Well done. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice writing...I seem to get more weeds in the backyard when romance is not flowing smoothly..James |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very well written, enjoyed. Jason |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautifully sad QjQ I loved it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Geez Glenn, this is so sad, my friend...thinking of you, wishing you well |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hardest feeling in the world is loneliness, my heart feels for you, take care! ~ARH |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Nowhere near is pity for someone's lonliness as hurting, but I feel for you as well. I'm kinda in somewhat a same posistion..so.. I can empathize with you. Nice write....Check out my post "Jo" I'm trying to figure out a new style.. Jai |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thanks everyone for your replies,,,, A voice of honesty |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Great heartfelt write. Lipstick on mirrors and coffee cups are easitly cleaned ~~ time heals all wounds! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, something good has come out of something sad--this poem! My goodness, you did a fine job with this achy-breaky, lonely-heart situation! I'm there with you and I'm crying! Remember, "and this too shall pass"... Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed this very much. |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
the remembrances of you still casts shadows that linger within the place we shared together ____ loved this verse...i was listening to frank and it reminded me of that feeling Mike |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
QjQ - this is a lonesome poem, but I do understand your words, my best to you... BC |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
This has the sound of sadness Q. Lovely and sad is this write. See Ya Bon-Bon |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this left me with thud, a different twist of you, but good |
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