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Open Poetry #27

Bargain of truth

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-22 07:09 PM

She says with regret
I understand what you meant
and push, came to loss

and her power was nothing
a bargain of truth
We gamble
with truth

she shoves with
an understanding

I know her love
and I often
hate the truth

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-24-2003 12:06 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-22 07:47 PM

Jason - you say it well, the truth at times one dislikes very much...

BC

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-07-23 01:47 AM

"I know her love
and I often
hate the truth"

Oh Jason...this speaks magnitudes!

What a wonderful write!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-23 02:11 AM

Jason, this one hurts. A lot of emotion
is in it. Very good write.

Hugs

Ethel

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-23 02:13 AM

Ouch...this one hurts, Jason.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

5 posted 2003-07-23 02:22 AM

Truth sucks sometimes.
Better to live truth than a wondorous and beautiful lie though.

Jai

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-24 07:18 PM

yes indeed Jason . . .
the truth does hurt sometimes
xxoo

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2003-07-24 08:58 PM

So often the truth is hard to face, but I'd much prefer to face it...take care

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