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PKreturns
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0 posted 2003-07-22 01:01 PM


Ah, what came first,
Love given, or love received?
Did you need to touch something real
Before you actually believed?
Matters not, these trivial things
Only that you do now feel
The joy of a thousand lifetimes
That you cannot conceal
Give in to the gentle flow
That brings you near to me
Suffer not thoughts of loss
But of what will come to be

Tend to this youthful garden
Ripening in Spring eternal
Revel in all of thy dreams
Bespeaking of breath nocturnal
Feel the savage wind
And the hope in the rain
Come, fall into loving arms
Never think of hurt again
Travel along the easy path
That brings you near to me
Hallow every word I speak
By being so dear to me


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-22 01:04 PM


i've read this before somewhere
PKreturns
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2 posted 2003-07-22 01:45 PM


Uhhh....thanks? lol
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3 posted 2003-07-22 04:43 PM


"Feel the savage wind
And the hope in the rain
Come, fall into loving arms
Never think of hurt again
Travel along the easy path
That brings you near to me"

yes....this is what I miss reading

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-07-22 07:11 PM


PoeticKnight~
You've returned to us in fine form~
This is just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janette
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5 posted 2003-07-22 10:17 PM


Ahhhhhhhhh, romance ... *sigh*

Enjoyed!

And I missed welcoming you to Passions .. so welcome!

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-07-22 10:26 PM


I enjoyed reading from you.Nicely done.
angelblueyes

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7 posted 2003-07-22 11:30 PM


Invigorating presentation PK...
Fresh, insightful and very romantic. TD

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