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Sometimes..........they escape me
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Sometimes..........they escape me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I keep those dreams within me feel my soul fan the flame sometimes they escape me and I whisper your name.... I keep those needs within me this ache in my heart isn’t love a shame? unexpected moments of emotion I have no means to tame I keep those wants within me desire, desperately unable to proclaim unexpressed devotion released only in lonely, crying shame I keep those dreams within me feel my soul fan the flame sometimes..........they escape me and I whisper your name.... ~SEA~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah Susan...certainly, one knows of some of your dreams... as it should be!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful SEA. Tugs at my heart strings this does. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA I keep those dreams within me feel my soul fan the flame sometimes they escape me and I whisper your name.... Well done. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I keep those wants within me desire, desperately unable to proclaim unexpressed devotion released only in lonely, crying shame Oh Sea, this hurts.  Hugs to you  Ethel |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This is simply beautiful poetry SEA. Deserves to go to the top. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. As always! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Susan...this is indeed so very beautiful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I knew by the title, this one was gonna be awesomely beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Gal, sometimes I just feel that I know your heart well enough for it to be my very own~ Lovely sweet poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shame??? dont know that word...not in a moths vocab. lol  It rhymes with flame... and that we know.  You already know Im diggin this one girlie... classic Sea-ache poetry. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - yes, some memories are difficult to release. I wonder if they ever are... BC |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Another beautiful write Sea. You have such a way with words!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan... decided to take a peek in here this evening and I sure am glad that I did. This as all of your work is absoultely beautiful You have my respect. Amy |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite deep the sea of this write. Well done. TD |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I keep those dreams within me feel my soul fan the flame sometimes..........they escape me and I whisper your name...." This is so beautifully penned, Susan. I felt the 'ache' as I read. This touched me. Hugs to you, friend, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I hear you ... oh yes ... those whispers... Enjoyed. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is beautiful. Eric |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wish someone would whisper my bloody name..sighsss |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You make it ache so good... |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
bliss sometimes I'll embrace thee dreams to kiss words to whis.. perpetualness... Gave the flame. I've whispered your name... Jai |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Yes, it is JUST like this.. I feel it.. but you can write it.. perfectly.. awesome SEA.. simply, utterly awesome Pepper |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This lovely poem has your stamp all over it...  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I keep those needs within me this ache in my heart isn’t love a shame? unexpected moments of emotion I have no means to tame Oh SEA~ what can I say to this!!! You're writing is always so beautiful~ Just like you wrote, you have a way of stirring those unexpected moments of emotion. I tell you, sometimes I don't even know what page I'm on anymore. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-24-2003 01:21 AM).] |
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