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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Recycled This life...no life beyond the box a one-way window, looking out to see the people scattering from heart that's slowly shattering in disillusion of illusion of a life in discontent A wave, a plea of, 'see me here!' the people pass - they do not hear and once in every little while a tug of hope - approaching smile a turn towards solitary cell "hello...please let me out!", a yell but only view, that meets the eyes an empty box... a spirit dies ~vlraynes "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-22-2003 03:57 AM).] |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Powerful, sad, thoughtful, and very true. ...somos los locos para siempre |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
ow vicky but listen to this... for every box out there there is this poem you wrote millions of throats and doubting eyes a song you are a smile  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice read,,, enjoyed..  |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Ouch.... Vicky, this hurts!  (You remind me of me, only more eloquent....)  Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 damn |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad.... but well written... Thank you for the words.... Goldenrose. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyLilBuddy~ 'once in every little while a tug of hope - approaching smile' I LOVE THIS thought !!!!!  *Huglets* my friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I'm with Bryan..what an awesome response left he.... I enjoy this poem very much..not the "sad" in it, but the truth in it..I know the feeling, as do many..Its good to be in the blue now and then, but I was once trapped here, and I realized that real life is outside of the box..Thats where I began to find little bits of me again... I love you dearly My Friend... Be well.. lv,g I want to run naked in the Blue! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write lady! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is sad and deep, but is still an awesome write. angelblueyes |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
An excellent poetic statement of a common, but sad, reality. Thank you for sharing it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing..James |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yet the "one-way box" is a true umbilical to the world for so many... This is an excellent write, m'friend... |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
If we could somehow simply tumble out . . . Instead we stay . . . we sometimes pout. Good one, another touch with so many. s.a.g. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah yes the "see me here" a small, but precious, participant of life... see me... hear me... Vicky, this is wonderful. Thank you. |
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