Open Poetry #27 |
TuTu to Wedding gown |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
at first chance when my eyes focused on you all dressed in your lavender tutu with ruffles my tender heart knew it was not puppy love i still remember seeing you behind the white picket fence with your puggy nose in the air and sticking your tongue out at me then one day as i was walking to school you had fallen from your bike and was laying there sobbing as i lifted your bike off and helped you up you gave me a hug and kissed my cheek my face blushed and you giggled and rode off turning with a clanceing smile that still lingers within my mind never will i forget you in blu jeans and t-shirts or the short shorts and pig tails and pony tails never forgotten will be when i waited for you to come down the winding stairs in your mint green prom gown with your auburn hair in a french twist remembrances of the look on your face have frozen in my mine when i asked you to be my wife now standing at the alter again i wait for you to walk down the aisle as the music starts you enter with your white gown and it's train gliding behind the veil your wearing cannot hide the glow on your face with your long auburn hair so silky flowing on your shoulders my truest and honest love for you has been within my heart from seeing you from tutu to your wedding gown A voice of honesty |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OOOH myyy....you have touched this hopelessly romantic heart. How wonderful this is... How lucky SHE is! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Oh..love your new smilie! ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Ohh, this was very romantic, life long love. How very sweet. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Awww how sweet! My husband (13 years my senior) says that he remembers seeing me in diapers...haha That used to be soooo embarrassing! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A truly uplifting write...so soft in it's romance.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
QjQ...this is so lovingly romantic, my friend. A beautiful and touching write. Hugs, ~Vicky P.S. It rained at my house last night! "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-21-2003 10:33 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, this is so beautiful. You know this hopeless romantic loves it!! Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was a very lovely write. Loving and sentimental. Huggums, EA |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh boy...tugging at my hearstrings..made me cry...so sweet, and devoted. The sweetest thing!!!! Choked me up. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
My friend this is so touching and romantic. Good jobber. Bon-Bon |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Q - this is just exellent! Definately a favorite of mine, now! Going in my library, darling.. I just love it! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What tenderness in this memory...elucidated beautifully. TD |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Lovely tribute to your lady Love! Tender write! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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