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The pills i take!
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The pills i take! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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okay,i was just taking my pills,when i got annoyed and came up with this lil poem here.  what do ya all think? LoL i hear by dedicate this one to all the people that have way to many pills to take! hehe*THE PILLS I TAKE!!!!* The pills i take the pills i take it makes my throat itch it makes it ache! it doesnt help my tummy out to much all it does is cause to much fuss! to much to take to much to take,oh how i hate these pills i must take! The pills i take oh what a mistake they swim in my body they make me shake! what good is it to take this vile things of mine. if all they do is make me look at the time! All i can do all i can wait is all day to the pills i must take! if i dont ill end up in a very bad state,oh how i wish i could cast them aside put them in water and watch them die! these pills of mine what a bind they make! I lose track of time every time i must take! Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I have know how this feels. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
your thoughts were expressed well,,, QjQ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...I know this, good write |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thanks guys,and to think LoL something creative came out of taking my pills! LoL i never would of guess i would be inspired by take my pills LOL  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I have medication that I have to take everyday for my lungs and I have felt this exact same way lots of times. It gets to be a pain, but we will get sicker if we don't. Hugs to you  Ethel |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Thanks for sharing your health ailments with me garysgirl i take about 20 some odd pills a day,because i have corhns diease. but my poetry is what keeps me sane to the pills i must take! hehe Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
would love to make you well without them and throw them away for you. Thanks for sharing your (Horrible day(S)) with the tablets. Goldenrose. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed listening to your thoughts ARCTIC WIND |
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