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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-06-15 12:09 PM


Oh my beating heart,
Is it not like thunder across a moonlit sky?

For you my love, I would surely die,
ten thousand pains, until death, to give you my last breath,

What must I do, to prove my love to you?
deep within thy soul, I have never felt such longing, such love that has this control,

Thy love, is like a drug, and I am addicted, afflicted, no longer can I sleep, nor eat,

My thoughts are only of you, day and night, night and day, for the things I start, I cannot complete.

I hunger and thirst for your words, I want to be filled by your love, every piece of you I want to consume,

You my love, are a sweet candy to be tasted and enjoyed, you are a delicacy I must savor, the most pleasing flavor to be explored,

For you my love, you are the rays of my sun, the light of my day, the moon of my night,the stars in my skies, the tears in my eyes,

I am mesmerized by your charm,
I pour out my heart, my soul to you,
Whatever you ask of me to do, I shall do.

I am your slave, for your love has captured me,
I beg thee a thousand times to release and pour thy soul into my heart,

Oh dear sweet love, this is death, to not touch thy face, kiss thy lips, to gaze into thine eyes,
I am dying,

Breathe into me, for I am yours forevermore, you
are my life, my love, the one truest of loves I have been waiting for,

Come sweetly into my heart, come my love, kiss thy lips ever so sweetly, gently embrace my body, set our hearts free,

Breathe your love into me..........


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-15-2003 08:22 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-15 12:10 PM


This is so beautiful. I mean really romantic.

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-06-15 12:12 PM


very good,, you express your feelings well i'm sure it will be received well!!!

QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-15 12:36 PM


deep sigh
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-06-15 12:38 PM


Thank you! can anyone tell when a person is in love?lol!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-06-15 04:59 AM


Well...this is one of those moments that would be hard to resist...James
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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6 posted 2003-06-16 06:01 AM


Wow, what love.the person you are writing about is most fortunate.
Thank you for opening your most precious heart and allowing us in briefly.

goldenrose.


Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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7 posted 2003-06-16 07:31 PM


well ARH, it was so nice to see a write from one of my fav's. Love that new pic, the website doesn't work for some reason was hoping to see more.

Parker....

.. you truely have a romantic heart.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2003-06-16 07:34 PM


Millette:

this is amazing - beautiful
Sorry if I missed your entrance
Welcome to PIP!

This reminds me a bit of De Millay
and Shakespeare doing a
collaboration

very nice
xxoo

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2008-02-06 05:50 PM


This Is very beautiful, I love this poem

ARCTIC WIND

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