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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Suspend belief for a moment catch me before I hit the ground warm my eyes - unfreeze them whispers lost without a sound don't turn your eyes away save me from myself tonight only you can change how things are and bring my breath back to life witness my imaginary darkened world pulling you down - taking over me my forever dying last wishes are the things that will never be how your face is veiled in shadow of sadness for the years how beautiful you are mesmerized beneath the canvas of your tears lay your hands on my aura i'm a slave to the touch another bleeding heart messiah who's lost more than too much together let's rise from ashes graven and breathe the pure air of night from your lips to mine - like in dream and bring my breath back to life (The title i guess is fitting for my return) [This message has been edited by PKreturns (07-21-2003 11:52 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What did you do, old man? Lose your password? LOL...Welcome home! Your poetry is as welcome as ever was! |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Yes....new job and email, and lost old password, so....here I return! LOL Thanks Sunshine. |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Nice poem. ~Kelly~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
PK Intensely passionate....beautiful to read! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful PK I loved this and since I have never met you Welcome Back and hello! I put this on a card for you xxoo |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome back! I am not sure if we have met...but I did enjoy this fine post! Chris "At one glance |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice write...and read. ~wranx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome Back! Wonderful re-entrance post...LOL. Now must I spend the rest of the day trying to figure out who you are? Do/did I know you? Awww come on...give me a hint!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Thank you all....very much. PK = PoeticKnight |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
but of course...who else would it be?...welcome back ...h |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yesss!!!  Welcome back!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, PK, I don't know if I should be embarrassed or not? "PoeticKnight" sounds familar. Have you been gone for awhile? My memory does kind of come and go sometimes. LOL Anyuway, I liked this post and look forward to reading more of your work.  Hugs (and welcome back!)  Ethel |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
The ONLY thing that I can see wrong with this is that MY name wasn't on it. This is one of the best writes that I have seen on here in a while. Fabulous job!!!! We see the light of those |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you...It's wonderful to read you again. and? I AM chuckling "catch me before I hit the ground" ? and you are telling ME to stay away from the bungee? giggle, at least I use a rubber--BAND, that is! heh hehe  Welcome home Poetic Knight.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You must have left before I joined...but nevertheless good to read your words.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wow...Poetic Knight and walker back on the same day. Must be old home week at PIP. Good to read you again PK.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Suspend belief for a moment catch me before I hit the ground warm my eyes - unfreeze them whispers lost without a sound don't turn your eyes away save me from myself tonight only you can change how things are and bring my breath back to life" stunning... look what I found this morning! Hello stranger.....so great to have you back and posting *sigh* poetry for us again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: cool write! |
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