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Sunday Nature Reserve(July) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Luminous blue of dragonfly and rusted copper of butterflies, welcome the morning. Shimmering grasses are silent witnesses to the call of birdsong. Scent of wild air, of nettles,of funghi, breeze of summer rushes it to my senses. Dark, overhanging nooks and crannies of a coppice, twisted and knarled limbed trees, clothed in emerald moss. Swallows sliceing, scissoring the air with sudden shock of blue light. Dead stoat by the toepath, killed by mans steel, already decaying,jaw gaping with bone white teeth. Horizon split bt shimmering green grassland and blue,white cloud sky. Reed buntings on rushes sway back,and back and back again,in the freshening wind. Free i feel and free i am,free as a bee, love creeps into my thaughts before i am back in my wild freedom. Purple, yellow, white, pink and blue wildflowers surround me on either side as i walk. Silky smooth bark of the silver birch, like living marble. Grey and white clouds pass overhead, slowly, while boomerang swifts master the air easily. But love steels back into my mind,holding it inside me, i am happy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so that's what it feels like....nice |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Once again Dixie you do me honour thank you ...... Goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Phil: this is amazing You leave me with such beautiful imagery Good for you I loved this and what a place to be xxoo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I was there with you my love, Glad my love made you happy...and my love would keep coming back to you throughout you thoughts, Your words of beauty are timeless, an artist you are, the picture was breathtaking...as your love... xxx Love thy Vermilion Queen |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Luminous blue of dragonfly and rusted copper of butterflies, welcome the morning. Shimmering grasses are silent witnesses to the call of birdsong. HOW BEAUTIFUL ARE YOUR WORDS?!! Very much enjoyed this. it's a  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I'd call descriptive writing at its best! The dead stoat actually added to the realistic portrayal of nature's way--Life & death, beautiful and the not so beautiful... Your pen is a veritable paintbrush!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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freespirit Junior Member
since 2003-07-03
Posts 24USA |
"Free i feel and free i am,free as a bee, love creeps into my thaughts before i am back in my wild freedom" This says it all Goldenrose how beautiful your eyes must see the world Freespirit |
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