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Final Years
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Final Years |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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I'm lying here thinkin bout our weekends at home we'd rent a movie enjoy being all alone you'd make a special home cooked dish I'd mix some drinks with a different twist Suddenly we'd kiss because it felt so right with the radio playin low we'd discuss our life talk about the future spill our eager thoughts later we'd make love and share some pillow talk. (build) Now I'm starin at the ceiling In this flea bag of a room with a face I don't know by my side instead of you. Tryin to get over you with someone else wishin I could find a way to deal with myself Chorus: Girl we have a history of sharing love and tears Things he'll never get to know bout your needs and fears if we don't get back together we'll waste our final years Oh I can't forget all the vacations with you fancy restaurants night life and dancing til two I can still see you in your long evening gown at special occasions with your elegance abound But I still loved you in those old jean shorts workin in the garden or at the summer resort Can't figure what happened to our committment and dreams those promises of me for you and you for me chorus: Girl we have a history of sharing love and tears Things he'll never get to know bout your needs and fears if we don't get back together we'll waste our final years copyright ....Roach&MorrisE3B1G903/reg The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It's got yearning, hope, all of those things.. I give it a 10  Pepper |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool song! I can almost hear this! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Time is fleeting, and I'm getting older too. and another thing, I think camelot was over rated! Thanks ethome, I like singing to your songs. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This took me back several years thank you, Ethome |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, I love this song. I could almost hear the music.  Hugs  Ethel |
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