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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-07-17 10:11 PM

If I could gather you around
in shades of autumn leaves

I'd place them one by one
down the center of my peace

To adore you in the candlelight
and toast you with my eyes

Burning amber in the moonlight,
blowing kisses across the sky

I'd breathe you in down deep inside
and wish upon a single star

Kindling the flames
for every dream that you inspire

Savoring the fall
on a bed of golden leaves

When December rains a shiver
and the weather starts to storm

Will you come to me at last
and whisper in my ear

that you still love me~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-18-2003 02:25 AM).]

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-17 10:17 PM

...I think...
I love you...
Twas' a nice write.
Thanks for the warm fuzzies.

Jai

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-07-17 10:22 PM

Hey Bluesylady! Now this is very, very tender and sweet. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-07-17 10:33 PM

Blues...this is lovely...especially this...

"When December rains a shiver
and the weather starts to storm

Will you come to me at last
and whisper in my ear

that you still love me~"

Being the lover of storms that I am, this just grabbed me.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-17 10:47 PM

Oooh how lovely...very gentle and loving.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-07-17 11:13 PM

Will you come to me at last
and whisper in my ear

that you still love me~

.........i still do, i never stopped
very nice words, you are one romantic blonde

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-18 03:20 AM

love it! ending perfect!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-07-18 11:43 AM

Thanks so much for reading everyone.
Some days are just plain lonely!
Whoooa is me, what's a girl to do!

Hugs you guys~

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

8 posted 2003-07-18 09:17 PM

Very lonely, loving. Enjoyed this very much.

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

9 posted 2003-07-18 09:19 PM

this poem came to me as an dream-desire...something that you hope someone will fill, and if some has before your blessed...i loved the way you encapsolated desire in the verse...beautifull

Mike

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-07-18 09:20 PM

BluesSerenade - it's nice to see the romantic side of you again...

BC

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

11 posted 2003-07-18 10:48 PM

flows nicely with poetic beauty.

Jason

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

12 posted 2003-07-19 12:55 PM

This one is going to the

Another wonderful write Bluesy girl!

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (07-19-2003 12:56 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-07-19 09:45 PM

Jesus Bluesy . . .
this ohh so true so true
xxoo

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-07-19 09:54 PM

To adore you in the candlelight
and toast you with my eyes

Burning amber in the moonlight,
blowing kisses across the sky

I'd breathe you in down deep inside
and wish upon a single star

Lori, this is so beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

15 posted 2003-07-19 10:25 PM

This was beautiful. You are a talented poetess.I look forward to reading mor from you.Thanks.
angelblueyes

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

16 posted 2003-07-19 10:34 PM

Yahuh...blonde and beautiful.
What a wonderful write...innocent, tender, expressive. Well done girl. TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2003-07-20 09:18 PM

How nice to come home to.
You all suprised you did, thank you so much for reading, it encourages me in every way.

The firmest friendships are formed with mutual adversity, like steal unites with the fiercest flame. (author unknown to me)

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-20-2003 10:46 PM).]

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

18 posted 2003-07-22 07:23 AM

Very nice indeed!

i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right,
just know i'd die to be with you tonight ~ sandford

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

19 posted 2003-07-22 08:34 AM

This a very nice write of love....thank you for the beautiful words....

Goldenrose.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

20 posted 2003-07-22 08:42 AM

A soft romantic approach..very beautiful..

believe in what your heart feels...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

21 posted 2003-07-22 09:25 AM

picking a favorite liine here is impossible! The begining grabs me,

"If I could gather you around
in shades of autumn leaves"

then this....is just so beautiful,

To adore you in the candlelight
and toast you with my eyes

Burning amber in the moonlight,
blowing kisses across the sky

and this part goes so perfect with the begining lines ,

Kindling the flames
for every dream that you inspire

Savoring the fall
on a bed of golden leaves

and the ending....*sigh* I am so ready for Fall!

When December rains a shiver
and the weather starts to storm

Will you come to me at last
and whisper in my ear

that you still love me~

this is definately a favorite from you, one I intend to keep

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

22 posted 2003-07-22 09:32 AM

"...When December rains a shiver..."

Ohhh, I do like the texture of your writing, BlueSerenade!

I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest.
~Dorene

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

23 posted 2003-07-22 09:33 AM

"When December rains a shiver
and the weather starts to storm

Will you come to me at last
and whisper in my ear

that you still love me"

This is great!!
Going in my library.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

24 posted 2003-07-22 09:52 AM

Lori......Romantic, soft, like lace on table.
Well done, as your poetry always is.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

25 posted 2003-07-22 09:55 AM

If I could gather you around
in shades of autumn leaves

I'd place them one by one
down the center of my peace

You're a beautiful lady, with a beautiful mind to match.

into my library, dear blues. xxxxx

Ramon
Junior Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 28

26 posted 2003-07-22 10:02 AM

so singasongy. Beautiful.

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