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Open Poetry #27

Memory

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-14 11:21 PM

Her image is blured
she is no more
nothing but a few leftover photographs
shes gone
lost in all the confusion
no one wanted her
no one cared
they all shurged her off
like a mutt or a stray dog
now shes gone
like a lost memory...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-14 11:51 PM

Yes I have known this feeling. Excellent poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-06-15 12:18 PM

She can never be gone....not as long as you keep remembering her in your wonderful poetry.

Tima

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-06-15 12:21 PM

sad but beautiful! heartfelt! enjoyed it!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-06-15 12:22 PM

gone from vision perhaps but lingering in the heart till...

QjQ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-15 12:35 PM

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

6 posted 2003-06-15 12:45 PM

oh my.... i think im going to cry..what a sad poem

very well written.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-02 02:10 PM

Thats very Sad

Hopping all is well there!

ARCTIC WIND

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