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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
i shed a tear for the human race i shed a tear for those who place last we require all the foolish taste tombstone shimmer for those in the past quit discussing argumentive flakes crutches for bull---- walking in the looking glass speed up the peoples pace...tension mounts.. i see your face laughs amazing rights..disgusting grace..it's all we've known... we've been walking all the narrow way.. and below us is the fate keep it coming..relax we won't pass crap i've been drinking out my flask.. a pictures taken i see the flash... developing all the wrath... keep running we can't hide... i think we've jumped from truth to lie conclusion to the puzzles missing piece our deceased will cease.. foolish statements make them keep their pride look in the light, it will not hurt your eyes i walk the line,i've seen your face i'd stop to talk..but time won't wait.. i've braced the backs and lost the weight.. we keep forgetting the buds won't taste... the narrow way the narrow way |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice,i enjoyed it. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Interesting. and has a rap feel to it when reading the lines.. |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this will be my last post, thank you very much,my band is starting to take off,and i don't have much time to do this and my job,i really just wanted to see if anyone really would pay attention to my words,and my theory was correct,so goodbye people,they fear what they don't understand,so they recluse from it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice to have you here for awhile, good luck with your band and your life |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write,, and good luck on your venture... QjQ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed.... ARCTIC WIND |
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