Sonnet, for Kellie Cantrell

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Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

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Transylconia, Winnipeg

0 posted 2003-07-20 10:38 PM

The pleasure of the slight and pleasant days
  Encounters us too early and too oft
  That we depart the momentary loft
Of thought too hastily, and 'hind us stays
A wounded seraphim, bleeding profuse
  Against dividing mirrors of stain'd glass
  Obscure as her dear eyes that we see past
To the vast, sunnèd garden's open sluice;
Scorn pleasure's dance, and scorn the apple tree
  And butterflies who on dead stems alight
   For in the chapel, known by precious few,
Behind that crumpled seraph did I see
  A vision most compelling to my sight:
   Divinest tulips in the lamplight grew.

[This message has been edited by Local Parasite (07-20-2003 10:46 PM).]

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-07-20 10:42 PM

Man you're deep. Either that or I'm extremely shallow, hehe.

Great write though I can't tear it apart line for line...I'd rather just tell you how good it was, and let you know that I LIKED!

A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one.
-Majorie Kinnan Rawlings-

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-07-20 10:45 PM

LP- This is very sweet and I like it very much. You are an amazing friend.
Love,
Kels

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-07-20 10:47 PM

that is because you are you, and, that was one of the most beautiful, and tender sonnets I have ever read. I commend you on an absolutely exquisite piece of writing.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-20 10:51 PM

Brian, you are so sweet and such a good friend. I hope you'll be there if I ever get in need. You are so compassionate. Do you know that?

Heart hugs to you and Kellie

Ethel

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2003-07-20 10:54 PM

Mysteria is right. And Kels here is your proof of no reason to doubt.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-20 11:33 PM

Brian . . .

*smiling*
it is not an easy task to see
into the soul of another . . .
xxoo

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2003-07-20 11:43 PM

This is amazing. You have grown in your talent while here. I certainly hope you try your hand at getting published.

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

8 posted 2003-07-20 11:49 PM

Martie

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California

9 posted 2003-07-21 12:02 PM

LP

Beautiful in word and deed!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-07-21 12:21 PM

YOU are the ultimate passionate friend,
and I'm proud to be on the same page.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-07-21 12:25 PM

This is beautifully done, Brian.
Your heart is showing tonight.

~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease
to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-07-21 12:57 PM

WOW...grins I know you love those. I actually got you to post in Open?!!! This is fantastic writing and excellent use of imagery.

Miah
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2003-07-21 12:59 PM

True friendship is priceless.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2003-07-21 07:38 PM

Brian~
There is a gracefully soft elegance to this~
*applause*
*applause*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2003-07-22 12:21 PM

Your compassionate heart--and talent!--are showing...

Warm hugs,
EA

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2003-07-22 01:57 AM

There's something to be said about keeping it simple!!!

And you have written it beautifully LP,
~take your bows~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2003-07-22 06:22 AM

Thanks to Raph for getting LP
to put Kellie's Sonnet in Open....

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

18 posted 2003-07-22 04:47 PM

This really means a lot to me. I have glued a copy in my journal. Thanks!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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