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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Oh heavy spare me this tonight Eager is the pain to please to never explain You skim over how it hurts me How many times will I touch water before sinking Oh heavy spare me this endless cut and stitch. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I needed this. I can't stand days when you don't post. I guess that's what you were talking about, huh? I'll try to do one a day then? lol lov ya gumdrop |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
fantastic gem, even though you're a rude brit who leaves in the middle of convos |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ya know you can always count on us to rain on your day  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful pull to these words. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem: ancient beating distant muffle beneath cotton clouds of memory listen . . . Rusty chain rattle in this graveyard Vision blurred between these bars of steel xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write...so very much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol gem, i saw you..in the login place. I've been thinking, and I wanted to ask you because I thought you'd give me your honest answer. so here it goes: did you like my poems better when they were sweet? or now when they are dark? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
hello lizzieee. its funny you should say that, as i was going through my library the other day, and looking through the archives at your stuff, as well as others. you've always had a consistent, very unique style that sets you apart. a freshness, and a way of questioning and seeing things. And i too noticed the change, i suppose progression into a slightly darker element, and you know i love it. i like both liz's. the light fluffy side, and the angst side, cos like i said, in each theres a consistent unique liz ness to them. the dark suits you, and into it you do bring light, so, i love both.  were growing up, we need both. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How many times will I touch water before sinking Hi Gemma  It's good to see you here.  I like this, you know. Hope you're better? See you later, my friend.  Heart hugs  Ethel Mae |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol..you make me feel better. hehe (gem, my cousins were upstairs with me listening to their music, and i was asking them what their favorite songs were, and one of the said "the sad song with the piano" I had no idea what she was talking about. lol, she called it 'the bartender.' turned out to be the scientist...hehe i'm still making fun of her, and she was trying to sing it..it was funny. then she told me a pickup line a friend taught her...she's been to all sorts of weird concerts and stuff, and all this time I thought she was NORMAL. What is normal anyway? lol..thought i'd share my interesting day with you.) you sound so smart sometimes |
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