Open Poetry #27 |
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When U're Not around........ |
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comp_xp New Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 2 |
When U're Not Around As the sun rises spreading it's warmth aceoss, I am raised by your love. Grasses which have droplets of dew, or mist or snow, My eyes are in tears When I know you are not here -, Anymore. Birds calling from thr trees, trying to wake people who are in deep sleep, I here your speech, whenever I go back to the graves of sorrow. Empty benches in the park call me to sit, to get lost in the days which will never come back. Winds that blow, touch my heart and go, I whisper in them to tell you, that you are the one, I miss the most. Rains give me the pain of not seeing you again. Night when falls, as the cool breeze brings calmness to all -, You come in my dreams to whisper in my ears, rub my tears, hold my hand and say, "no odds or fears can take you away from me -, My dear ".... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Poignant write. It sounds as if you are really missing this soulmate. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You come in my dreams to whisper in my ears, rub my tears, hold my hand and say, "no odds or fears can take you away from me -, My dear ".... Even though this is sad, it's a well-written poem. I enjoyed reading. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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