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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-17 10:36 PM

Pushed harshly fore, a panel three
who gathered here for judging me
today must come, a reckoning
from all who's felt the pain of thee

But what of cause? I cried to them
are you to judge, or just condemn?
today must come, a reckoning
was all the answer heard from them

First witness called by me was God
"we protest, thats rather odd!"
"today must come a reckoning"
What?, you deny the truth of God?

Not what we said, words twisted here
"what you meant", I said with a sneer
So bring to me, your reckoning
I need no trial, I have no fear

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-18-2003 02:55 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-07-17 10:38 PM

WOW...Jason...this is powerful stuff!
Very well done, sir.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

2 posted 2003-07-18 10:49 PM

Masterfully crafted with ingenuity and a small streak of venom. Great read, Darkling.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-19 01:44 AM

wow! that hit hard!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-07-19 03:20 AM

You hit the nial right on the ehad.VEry powerful in few words.Well done.
angelblueyes

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-07-19 03:11 PM

very good write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

risingphoenix
New Member

since 2003-07-01

Posts 8

6 posted 2003-07-19 03:15 PM

This is pretty cool, faith is something that seems valuable to you by this poem.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-07-19 03:17 PM

BRAVO, again.

Can I say something else? the shorter they are, the more powerful.
I'm talking about the length of the poem, obviously.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-07-19 06:32 PM

Jason - if I didn't know better I would think that this was written about me and some of the trials and tribulations of a while ago. Very nice write...

BC

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-07-19 09:24 PM

smiling . . .
keep that attitude
this is awesome Jason
xxoo

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