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Full Moon Sky |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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There's a dragon in the sky, its head is made of clouds, there's moonlight in its mane, all I am allowed to do, is to dream not to touch, to want not to ride, for it isn't really there at all. On a sheet of shadowed paper in a wooden frame askew, the muted colored truth doesn't show the glow of you, the sunlight in your hair; the smile doesn't touch the shadows aren't warm, you're not here. ©2003 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Heart touching with a sadness that hurts to read. You convey emotion so well, icebox. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ Very poignant write, indeed~ Last evening, as I stood watching the moon-in-full ... I swear to you I saw - 'There's a dragon in the sky, its head is made of clouds, there's moonlight in its mane, I could only think of the Oriental meaning of an eclipsing time of the moon when their belief is that the dragon is eating the moon~ Couldn't believe my eyes when I read your post~ My, my ! Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is so beautiful. I can't really find the words to describe how this piece made me feel. For what it's worth, I love it.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
in a wooden frame askew, the muted colored truth doesn't show the glow of you Some things are just too good to be true! *sigh* You convey so much through your writing icebox. Much enjoyed! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ice, Oh, so sad. You have spoke of her before I believe. I am sorry, but thank you for sharing her memory with us. Patricia |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I felt this and it sure is touching. Your words speak volumes! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Martie ~ I think sometimes I should learn to write of joy. Thank you for taking time to read and to comment. Marge Tindal ~ *smile* Why would I not believe you? Thank you for telling me, I like to know where he wanders. Kaoru ~ You just did describe your feelings *grin* thank you! BluesSerenade ~ I am glad you like this poem. I do value your opinion. Patricia ~ You are correct; not all memories live in linear time. Thank you for your insight. Saunni ~ Your comment is a kindness. Thank you. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
There's a dragon in the sky, its head is made of clouds, there's moonlight in its mane," WOW! Magical ARCTIC WIND |
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