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Open Poetry #27

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-18 02:18 PM

I saw it in your eyes,
missing reflection,
no longer in want.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-18 04:42 PM

Wow...!!!
Eric

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

2 posted 2003-07-18 04:44 PM

how 3 lines...can make a lifetimes worth of memory with a past relationship..seem so clear and new...this piece touched me..

Mike

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-07-18 04:47 PM

I read this three times and came up with a different interpretation each time! Made me think!

Warm hugs,
EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-18 05:53 PM

Yes, I saw it too, and felt it, and lived it...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-07-18 07:26 PM

Wonderful write. So much for the mind to interpret, when the heart is clear. TD

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-07-18 07:29 PM

enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-07-18 07:36 PM

Maureen, a lot said in these few words.

Hugs

Ethel

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

8 posted 2003-07-19 12:12 PM

Powerful and evocative of thoughts.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-07-19 04:50 PM

you're good

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