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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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this one is and this one be no he's not coincidence he is strength artistry pumping blood of ancestry the Dane he sees the vision's blood deep within the pipe and steel a glint of copper in the sun aluminum to keep the line tall beyond the average eye blinded by his light--I see There you see him in his work bending leaf-- as branches sway he brings to us a touch of breeze there in that metallic tree-- I lift my hair and dance his tease arch my back in mimickry touching tin of stinging heat-- Oden praised the madviking... I await my pillaging. licking lips of synergy... Let me be the Goddess then steer the point and rope my sighs sail on to the harbor there-- I'll catch the ocean in my thighs. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
FLOOD mmmmmmmmmmmm damn |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
That flows really well. I lift my hair and dance his tease Sounds amazing. |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
"Catch the ocean in my thighs...." That made my day all in all it was a good write Jai |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
There you see him in his work bending leaf-- as branches sway he brings to us a touch of breeze there in that metallic tree-- *** Chills. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
blinded by his light--I see There you see him in his work bending leaf-- as branches sway he brings to us a touch of breeze there in that metallic tree-- I lift my hair and dance his tease arch my back in mimickry touching tin of stinging heat-- Oden praised the madviking... I await my pillaging. licking lips of synergy... Let me be the Goddess then steer the point and rope my sighs sail on to the harbor there-- I'll catch the ocean in my thighs. =================================== Lordy Lordy...aint no touching you when you are well inspired...woooo hooo... that last verse is poetic gold baby... yer so cool   "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I'll catch the ocean in my thighs." Oh my...where is the line? Lovely, sensual, flowing... Susan C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...stunning! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magic dear Karen....pure magic in your words. hugs, Chris "There shall be eternal summer in the grateful heart." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, I read this when you first posted it...several times... and then I decided that I was coming back later for yet another read...or maybe more. Well, I've read it LOTS of times now, and it just gets better every time. This... "I lift my hair and dance his tease arch my back in mimickry touching tin of stinging heat-- Oden praised the madviking... I await my pillaging. licking lips of synergy... Let me be the Goddess then steer the point and rope my sighs sail on to the harbor there-- I'll catch the ocean in my thighs." Just WOW...I absolutely LOVE it, and especially that last line. Gotta echo JM...'poetic gold'...spun by the goddess herself.  Love ya, lady.  "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-17-2003 02:55 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
May Freya grant you safe passage on this journey, this quest a'viking; and, I ask my brother Loki not to plague you with cruel jests of fool's treasures.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn... Yer so cool lady... Love ya! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity You always amaze me, did you know that? You color so cool! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at icebox--YOUR BROTHER, huh?  and thanks all, with my apologies for not replying as much, but I'll try to catch up a bit tonight while I cook supper. (It's a method of mine, read, think, cook, reply, simmer, stir and serve. )Love to all, with my gratitude. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WOW |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God Woman! You do embody the soil within your veins . . . xxoo |
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