Open Poetry #27 |
Illusions |
Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
One day I saw you Sitting in quiet concentration Dark eyes mirroring Moving clouds and tossing sea I saw you Sitting all alone with only The whispering wind and The seagull's cry for company Did you know I saw you with my mind? Did you see me? Had I had this thought of you a year ago I would surely be crying by now so, I must be making progress I'm not even terribly disappointed And though I think of you (often) It is without heaviness I think of you as if remembering a dream Or an event that blurs with imagination Never really sure it actually happened A year ago that would have been an unsettling thought Now, it's just a thought. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,,,, A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how it happens that way, isn't it? good stuff! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
good write!!! that ol' four letter word time, I guess, really does work... I surely hope so at any rate, lol I enjoyed this. Pepper |
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