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One Left In The Night
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One Left In The Night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ONE LEFT IN THE NIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In the darkness of shadows concealed I lie with you and sleep, your warmth touches me calming my being… Dark once were the days and the chasm of nights echo’s as I dreamed and searched the deepness of the void, not knowing if or when I would ever find one true… One thousand dreams passed into eternity as the stars kissed the moon and then disappeared, until there was only one left in the night… ~~~~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful write Bill, you are so good at these. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-17-2003 09:41 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
One thousand dreams passed into eternity as the stars kissed the moon and then disappeared, Beautifully done Bill. hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My dreams begin with one, and are surrounded in the same. Beautiful poem BC~ especially the ending. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just lovely, Bill. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Are you certain that there was only ONE left in the night?!?  Lovely, lovely, lovely!!! Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Bill..you write romance beautifully. ~Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
One thousand dreams passed into eternity as the stars kissed the moon and then disappeared, until there was only one left in the night… ~~~~ left in the sky all alone, one star waits for you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill...beautiful, as always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This was just a spectacular poem. I especially love your first verse: In the darkness of shadows concealed I lie with you and sleep, your warmth touches me calming my being… Sounds like there is one who is tucked inside your heart. Wonderful writing, my friend. ***Ivy Rose |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, this is gorgeous ... Even though you're gone ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another beauty! love to read you! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
In the darkness of shadows concealed I lie with you and sleep, your warmth touches me calming my being… Heavy sighs...Oh Bill, you have out done yourself with this treasure. Just beautiful, my friend. Patricia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ This is simply lovely~ Thank you for the nice emails~ And ... yes, in a little while I hope to be able to handle your request. Send it to me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
One thousand dreams passed into eternity as the stars kissed the moon and then disappeared, until there was only one left in the night… Bill, this is really beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A gem, Bill...you do write beautifully.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautifully written.May you have many more wonderful dreams. angleblueyes |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written,,, A voice of honesty |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Bill . . . this is beautiful reminds me of the full moon and a lone star I saw in the sky that night a good night indeed xxoo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Beautifully penned!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
one dream, one desire, one love - how absolutely perfect. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very pretty words...lovely to read. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, I must say, you are consistent. Consistently romantic. I do enjoy so much your writing. This was especially good. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Excellent again; I enjoyed this one Bill Pepper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just had to come back for another read. This truly is lovely, Bill...and these lines... "One thousand dreams passed into eternity as the stars kissed the moon" I just love the thought of that. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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