Open Poetry #27 |
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Between Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Between Thoughts Today I felt the calm of me, no past reminding what's undone. Though eyes I watched, to see a sign displaced I felt, of stirring none. The "use to"s have become sedated, as sister thoughts have run their course. Today I felt the calm of me, wondering if it was remorse. I tried the look, the one that says for you I am, if that's your choice. The power of the eyes have spoken, even though no words did voice. It's déjà vu, illusioned twice or maybe three times, I've lost score. As time stands still, we're worlds apart as I await the next of more. I held my heart in open hand reaching out, was all to do. The scars of wanting, undefined the touch-me chance of charming you. Today I felt the calm of me the blending of my words refined that play among the shadows dark caught between thoughts intertwined. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you're as good as ever... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I held my heart in open hand reaching out, was all to do. The scars of wanting, undefined the touch-me chance of charming you. Today I felt the calm of me the blending of my words refined that play among the shadows dark caught between thoughts intertwined." Just beautiful, Maureen. I really enjoyed this. ![]() Hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I loved this, great poem with great flow. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I held my heart in open hand reaching out, was all to do. The scars of wanting, undefined the touch-me chance of charming you. Oh you pull and tug so hard at my heart! One of those days come back to get you??? ![]() Warm hugs Maureen~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some days are okay |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
touch-me..chance.. that was unique. You slip words together nicely. Checkout my post "Jo" I tried out a new style...(for me at least) Jai |
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