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To love her simply
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To love her simply |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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I wasted my nights writing constantly, till there was no lead in the pencil, while the heat from the lamp on the nightstand drove me senseless. I imagined myself in a large auditorium, in front of a single person. Plaster fell from the walls of the corridors when I started reading my verses. I wanted to make her love me, (as if she hadn’t loved me otherwise) to make sure that she wasn’t bluffing with her bottomless loving eyes. I wanted to make her yield to me, and force her to profess her love for me, as if she refused to give it up willingly, so I had to perform a robbery. I wanted to overtake her with lightning and thunder, giving her everything in me. So I wasted my nights writing; I didn’t know how to love her simply. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (06-16-2003 02:23 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting write,,,,, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Nicely done. Eric |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Why is it we seem to always want to complicate things? Great thoughts here, well written |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Trying too hard is our first mistake... Love, like all things will be, if indeed it is meant to be. I have lost way too much sleep worrying about things that I have no control over. A wonderful poem Master~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very open and honest write.. Much enjoyed the read... ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* sorry makes me think of someone... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...I know this well |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One woman's simple is another woman's poet... and a poet, I'm afraid is never simple. Master...  |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
I always give a lot. Sometimes a bit much, but I love her very much as I know you love yours so I give all I have to give. If it weren't for my horse... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This write intrigues me. Did she love you back? Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Interesting! ARCTIC WIND |
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