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Rev[e]lation - repost, because Muse vacated premises
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Rev[e]lation - repost, because Muse vacated premises |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Rev[e]lation Even imaginings become real after time… …you did You found in my fantasy a decision to see if a bubble were to burst, would either of us still exist… fragile was the time when you allowed my dream reality to walk into your arms can you feel me, still? The taste of you wakes me and I would dream to kiss you again if nothing more than to revel in your elation. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write, and I feel like the subject of this is me, but that would be telling a lot about me then, wouldn't it? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The taste of you wakes me and I would dream to kiss you again if nothing more than to revel in your elation." Oh my! Oh Wow! I love this.. and such a sensually soft ending! A keeper for my library..thank you! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
fragile was the time when you allowed my dream reality to walk into your arms This is so, so beautiful. All of it... A  for me, too.  hugs Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Soft and sensual...and very romantic.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it...are you sure you weren't writing this one from my mind...I wish  hugssss M |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I started to quote from this piece...but I would sincerely have to quote the entire poem. Soft your words flow upon my heart as I nod in understanding. Patricia |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Dixie - what a compliment - thank you! Enchantress - another compliment - to be stored amongst your keepers...thank you... Ah Ethel - you make me shine. Thank you. Scorpio - the romanticism was for you... nakedthoughts - you didn't hear me tiptoe in, did you?  Patricia...you do visit my mirror frequently...thank you, Lady Poet... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Interesting write....and thanks for all your kind replies to my garbage.... |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
fragile was the time when you allowed my dream reality to walk into your arms so true...you hit a chord Mike |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
I love this!!! And totally agree with what enchantress said. I love the intricacies of this poem, it seems to have a lot of hidden truth even in the title. This was a joy to read |
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