I'm so aching and crying and longing..I hurt..

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Open Poetry #27

I'm so aching and crying and longing..I hurt..

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:37 PM

pulsating painful blood
breathing yearning air
she is the air, receding back to me and nowhere..
empty..
full of void
full of abyss
my reminiscing without bliss..
a kiss, a hug, something!
her chest to my chest
carress
be blessed
heart in pain
raining rain of implausible pain

shoulder to shoulder..hearts not far from another
constricting
eating
sucking away
at the feeling felt without a way

no outlet no love
no release no dove

no passion

no soul-taking,
heart-breaking,
mind-scaping, love-making...

is sweet when she touches my heart with
her blanket of being.

Unrefined..broken..gone.

A nothing though something as I cling undone.
The nothing is doomed to the something enriched by my longing to make us one.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-16 08:40 PM

Oooh, this one's form is really cool.

As for the emotional aspect, it's sad.. I feel that longing as well, friend..
It kind of pounds as I walk my miles..

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-16 10:17 PM

fabulous,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-17 12:57 PM

geez I love the sad ones! love this!

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2003-07-17 01:01 AM

This is unreal the way you explain missing someone. Simply great!

Though sorry for your pain.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2003-07-17 01:30 AM

I know how you feel! very painful...chest hurts, you cry at love songs...etc....excellant way of describing missing the one you love!

Thanks~ A Romantic Heart

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-17 05:28 AM

Couldn't help but miss her earlier today.
That feeling in my chest....whoo
I hate the fact that I love, but love it.
The chest pains inspired this.
The wanting to be even closer than your flesh can touch.
Thank you all for the motivation to continue writing here.
An RomanticHeart...you hit it on the nose.

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