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Angel Falling |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~*~ On edge of ledge, of precipice, I teeter to and fro. My wings are clipped, I cannot fly, then down like rock, I go. Faster, faster, down I go, spinning 'round and 'round. Death awaits, if I don't wake, before I hit the ground. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-17-2003 01:12 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Lindy..you been having scary nightmares? or is it one of those horrible days. I hope its neither.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Angel falling or fallen angel? James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Linda, don't fall. Do you want us to put a safety net of arms under you to catch you? We will.  Hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
hm... hope you wake soon.. or rather find a dream. closing up your nightmare seams.. Blink and awake soft as warm lake the dream that you dream ice cream... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
"If all my friends jumped off a cliff, I wouldn't jump with them. I would be at the bottom to catch them." I'm waiting with my arms wide open and a safety net. I'm sprinkling you with faery dust, now awake from your slumber. Loves and Grins, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gem ~ Yes, I have! I miss my family! My Mom, my Dad, my sister and my nephew who is like a son, all just moved thousands of miles away!  I manage during the day to keep things in perspective and be happy for them all, but lately whenI am sleeping, I have been having nightmares! Oh, well--and this too shall pass!  Huggums snuggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ I may be falling, but I'm no fallen angel! LOL Hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm with Ethel and Marti...waiting with arms open to catch you...because that's what friends are for. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-16-2003 07:54 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ How sweet--"put a safety net of arms under you to catch you"... --Okay! Please do! Until I'm over this initial hump of my birth family all moving thousands of miles away!  Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JaiOfHeaven ~ I will read your beautiful, poetic reply before I go to sleep tonight! That should do the trick and keep those nightmares away! Thank you!Lovin' hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ I'm bigger than a bread box! I wouldn't want to break your arms! If you joined Ethel and the other Pipsters she may be gathering, it might lessen the blow! Luvvums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vicky ~ And that was the kind of caring reply that one would expect from a friend! Thank you! Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I teeter to and fro, my wings are clipped, I cannot fly, then down like rock, I go." Add my arms to that net, STAT! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kaoru ~ "STAT!" works for me! Thank you, for risking your life to save me! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
I felt as if I was actually falling and I could picture the scene. Very well written with a great ending... "Death awaits, if I don't wake, before I hit the ground." Anwaar. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Anwaar ~ Sorry if I brought you down with me! Hope you had a safe landing! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Earth Angel, If it's a dream or even reality at all Just know I am your kinder place to fall... I understand... and there are many friends here. Sincerely, Sauni. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The "S" in Saunni stands for sweetness, sincerity--and sugar & spice! Sweet dreams! EA |
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