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Moon Sighs
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Moon Sighs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~Moon Sighs~ ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Vanilla rays across this night of sighs in realize catches me in soft surprise at pure glory of her glowing knowing, half a world away she drips soft lighting on another’s night Vanilla~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"she drips soft lighting on another’s night Vanilla" Not only is it fun to look at, but the writing contains it's own imagery as well! I can just smell this hinted in a summer breeze, vanilla.. Beautiful!  |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Vanilla rays...that made me kinda hungry. As if I could eat your words. sigh..in realize. That was tight...keep on writing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, now, isn't this special! The crescent moon shone right off of the page!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...there we go...I've missed your 'moon' poetry, my friend. Good to see lady luna rising again. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So pretty, Marge/sis...the moon and you! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ah, there is none better than the words that flow from your pen of our orb of moon. You ARE the goddess of la luna shining forth always. Huggles, Marti |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is so pretty. Vanilla is my favorite fragrance...I could almost smell it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely Marge.. very creative. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, you have the writings of an angel. You do! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
vanilla is a hazy summertime daydream this is pretty marge, really nice and light |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it was beautiful, wasn't it? beautiful write Marge! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh wow !!!!!!!! that is so fantastic marge. creativity and beauty at is best. lovely lovely work. hugs from me june xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Marge, as always, this was beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: All your poetry is so special but your moon poems have a quality that is unique! Really lovely! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a creative presentation Marge. Such enthusiasm and such delight in your writes. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely as always Marge. Hope you are feeling well. hugsss M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - nice to see you. As always... BC |
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