Open Poetry #27 |
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Love pains |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Console me and turn the page of your facade! Embrace the light the extends from the pureness inside me! Die in your own confusion...as you leave the gentle heart, the gentle soul, the gentle home! Find yourself in a room filled with light, breathe as the air becomes thick and constricts your lungs. The light dissapates and you remain in your own game. Tagging the light and sharing your misery. Daggers dripping with poisons that eat away at even a man's spirit are your weapons.. why have you stung me with them? My hands became silk when I touched you. Words softer than the touch I gave. Love beyond the word. [This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-16-2003 04:12 AM).] |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"My hands became silk when I touched you." Lovely post, and welcome to Passions, by the way! ![]() Anticipating more from you, now. ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
JaiOfHeaven~ What a lovely first post. I enjoyed reading this and hope to see lots more from you. Welcome to Passions! ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Thanks you guys. I am enjoying myself... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definitely enjoying you being here...thanks for sharing |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more of your poetry and responses to our wonderful family of poets. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. Ethel----garysgirl Moderator/Passions in poetry [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-16-2003 09:28 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as the air becomes thick and constricts your lungs. The light dissapates and you remain in your own game. Tagging the light and sharing your misery. Daggers dripping with poisons that eat away at even a man's spirit are your weapons.. why have you stung me with them? ~*~ A wonderful entrance into the World of Passions in Poetry! Welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world...very nice write. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes as the others said welcome and i hope you enjoy your stay. a wonderful poem and keep up the great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this was a familiar tale but told with such a silken hand. Welcome to Passions, and I hope you are going to love the site as much as other members do. Looks like you are going to be a very welcome addition to the family.I enjoyed your first poem very much. ![]() Mysteria |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
....*feels all loved..* whoa...this is cool! Never knew there were others as passionate about writing as I am. I hope to see all of your writings as well everyone...and thanks for the welcome. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Jai and welcome, what an intense write...thorougly descriptive and filled with vision...emotion and dripping with love for this person, care beyond perception...and perhaps realizing that we are never where we would sometimes wish others to be...sometimes a little behind...sometimes further ahead in our journey, but always realizing, there is purpose to all's own personal journey...thanks for this beauty. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very nicely written entrance post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions... Some stunning lines here...too many to pick out a few. Enjoyed your entrance post very much. Good to read you. ThisDiamond |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
welcome to Passions in Poetry...I enjoyed your first poem...and I look forward to more.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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