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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-07-16 02:22 PM


I sat here thinking about you today
Nothing newnothing special
Just thinking
About the times we spent together
Phone calls in the dark
We've been away for a while
You and Me
Yet, somehow I know
One day
We'll meet again in the vastness
If only for a few short moments
Until then I shall remain here
Thinking of you
And wondering my life away

We see the light of those
Who find the world has passed them by
Too late to save a dream from growing cold...

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
jennirey
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1 posted 2003-07-16 02:24 PM


August 5th is a special day for me too. Hope your wondering takes you in the right direction.

Jen

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2 posted 2003-07-16 02:30 PM


Ringo this is so sad.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-07-16 03:13 PM


Oh god, this gave me goosebumps. that person, who you know, you'll see, and still feel the same for. be it 10 years down the line or 50. ahhh bitter sweet.
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-16 04:30 PM


ahhhh yep . . . my fifth wedding anniversary is in two days . . .
I do know how you feel
*hugs*
xxoo

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5 posted 2003-07-17 12:54 PM


it will always be like that I guess

sad but good write, and you know I love the sad ones

Saunni
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6 posted 2003-07-17 12:57 PM


What a heart touching write! I know the feeling well. I hope you don't have to wait very long though.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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7 posted 2003-07-17 02:30 AM


Makes me think of a few people I know from Passions... No brutality required.

Kielo

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8 posted 2003-07-17 02:58 PM


Nice, a special day for me too. Hope it turns out well.
Sandra

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9 posted 2003-07-17 07:25 PM


Well done...waiting for a true love to return is never easy..

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-07-18 01:31 AM


"Until then I shall remain here
Thinking of you
And wondering my life away"

I feel this one; I hope things are okay

... Even though you're gone ...

Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
11 posted 2003-07-19 10:51 AM


Thanks all... I feel a bit of explaination is in order, though... August 5th isn't the day I'm going to see her again... and I'm not sure I ever will, no matter how much I would like to. It's just the logistics of it. August 5th is just a special day in her life, and she pops on here once in a while, and I knew she would see it.
Thanks again for the kind words.

We see the light of those
Who find the world has passed them by
Too late to save a dream from growing cold...

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-21 08:05 PM


bump ^^^^
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13 posted 2003-07-26 02:55 PM


A nice poem.  Reminds me of a letter I received once years ago.  Very touching.  
Diane

PKreturns
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14 posted 2003-07-26 03:39 PM


Ringo...anyone who has a quote from Queensryche as a signature is a very cool poet in my book.

Good luck with her, take hold of the flame.

Ringo
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15 posted 2003-08-04 11:56 AM


Gemma- Thanks

Diane- You received a letter like this?? WOW!!!! Who would do such a thing??
lol

PK- Thanks. 'Ryche and Roll!!!!!

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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