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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-15 11:56 PM



run the blade
through the belly of
a midnight sky
bleed heaven down
upon this rock
i am tired of waiting

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2003-07-15 11:57 PM


Amazing as always
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
2 posted 2003-07-15 11:58 PM


Hmmmm....
Honeybee
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3 posted 2003-07-15 11:59 PM



Raph, you know that I know....and I'm tired too.  A powerful write as usual.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-07-16 12:01 PM


you know what,
im ready too..........
down here is overrated, some times aint it?

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-16 12:04 PM


Thanks guys..between this and Melissa's write god@heaven.com i got to thinking of a song

Heaven's gates won't hold me, I'll saw those suckers down...I'm gonna break right into heaven..I can't wait anymore...

forever the Stone Roses

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-07-16 12:05 PM


God this is a brilliant write

So are you taking a concensus here?
Because I want a first class ticket please?
lol you snuck in there . . .
I think I know that tune . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-16-2003 12:06 AM).]

icebox
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in the shadows
7 posted 2003-07-16 12:21 PM


I'd say you cut rigth to the point, Sir.


Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-07-17 12:43 PM


thanks Sue

thanks Ice

gemjop
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9 posted 2003-07-21 08:20 PM


ditto
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-07-21 08:24 PM



...damn!!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

scorpio
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right...there
11 posted 2003-07-21 08:34 PM


I think I understood this...I'm not going outside for awhile..

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-07-22 12:54 PM


awesome imagery
Krawdad
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13 posted 2003-07-22 01:19 PM


Precisely.
That's why heaven "is".
Curious tho, that you should choose such entry.
Ah, but maybe not, what with jihad and all.

Kraw'

dertah
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14 posted 2003-07-22 02:36 PM


i love rain and blood when it falls parrallel.  i open my mouth to the rain.  good write by the way.
Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2003-07-22 04:05 PM


I would be afraid nothing would bleed down.

Excellent writing.

Susan C.

AnamCara
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Canada
16 posted 2003-07-22 04:22 PM


Wow!

Love,
Angela

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-07-22 04:26 PM


Enjoyed this very much...
Only one way to get to heaven...and it involves dying and believing...James

ecrivan
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18 posted 2003-07-22 04:50 PM


nice and direct...makes you aware of the dichotomy of life.


vandana
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19 posted 2003-07-22 04:59 PM


nice
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
20 posted 2003-07-22 08:04 PM


Aenimal - at times I also get tired of waiting like this. Nice write...

BC

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
21 posted 2003-07-22 08:07 PM


Did I ever tell you that you rock my socks?

I just love every single piece you've written.

Keep 'em coming.

Dark Angel
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22 posted 2003-07-22 09:26 PM


Fantabulous imagery, Sir Raph, would love to look into er I mean through your eyes

Keeping this.

Maree

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
23 posted 2003-07-23 12:01 PM


Amen.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
24 posted 2003-07-23 12:06 PM


Thanks Gemma

Thanks Nancy lol

Scorpio maybe you didnt get it but thanks

krawdad is there a better way? being good has only got me hell down here

thanks dertah

Susan thats my fear too...voiiiiiiiiid

Thanks Angela

James the first is heaven the second is a crock in my opinion

Thanks Martin

thanks vandana

Thanks Bill aren't most of us

Kaoru means alot to me..nice socks lol

Yer a doll Maree, hugs..grope..oops that slipped it wasn't me i swear to Dog

Thanks jason slipped in there as i was replying

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-23-2003 12:08 AM).]

angelblueyes
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25 posted 2003-07-23 12:43 PM


This was awesome.SOmetimes you have to push forward instead of waiting.I enjoyed this.
angelblueyes

JaiOfHeaven
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26 posted 2003-07-23 01:43 AM


That was Powerful.
So few words but imagery bled into me.

Jai

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