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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-15 11:56 PM

run the blade
through the belly of
a midnight sky
bleed heaven down
upon this rock
i am tired of waiting

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-07-15 11:57 PM

Amazing as always

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-07-15 11:58 PM

Hmmmm....

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2003-07-15 11:59 PM

Raph, you know that I know....and I'm tired too. A powerful write as usual.

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-07-16 12:01 PM

you know what,
im ready too..........
down here is overrated, some times aint it?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-07-16 12:04 PM

Thanks guys..between this and Melissa's write [email protected] i got to thinking of a song

Heaven's gates won't hold me, I'll saw those suckers down...I'm gonna break right into heaven..I can't wait anymore...

forever the Stone Roses

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-16 12:05 PM

God this is a brilliant write

So are you taking a concensus here?
Because I want a first class ticket please?
lol you snuck in there . . .
I think I know that tune . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-16-2003 12:06 AM).]

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-07-16 12:21 PM

I'd say you cut rigth to the point, Sir.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-07-17 12:43 PM

thanks Sue

thanks Ice

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-07-21 08:20 PM

ditto

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-07-21 08:24 PM

...damn!!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-07-21 08:34 PM

I think I understood this...I'm not going outside for awhile..

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-07-22 12:54 PM

awesome imagery

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

13 posted 2003-07-22 01:19 PM

Precisely.
That's why heaven "is".
Curious tho, that you should choose such entry.
Ah, but maybe not, what with jihad and all.

Kraw'

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

14 posted 2003-07-22 02:36 PM

i love rain and blood when it falls parrallel. i open my mouth to the rain. good write by the way.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

15 posted 2003-07-22 04:05 PM

I would be afraid nothing would bleed down.

Excellent writing.

Susan C.

AnamCara
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 41
Canada

16 posted 2003-07-22 04:22 PM

Wow!

Love,
Angela

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2003-07-22 04:26 PM

Enjoyed this very much...
Only one way to get to heaven...and it involves dying and believing...James

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

18 posted 2003-07-22 04:50 PM

nice and direct...makes you aware of the dichotomy of life.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

19 posted 2003-07-22 04:59 PM

nice

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

20 posted 2003-07-22 08:04 PM

Aenimal - at times I also get tired of waiting like this. Nice write...

BC

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

21 posted 2003-07-22 08:07 PM

Did I ever tell you that you rock my socks?

I just love every single piece you've written.

Keep 'em coming.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

22 posted 2003-07-22 09:26 PM

Fantabulous imagery, Sir Raph, would love to look into er I mean through your eyes

Keeping this.

Maree

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

23 posted 2003-07-23 12:01 PM

Amen.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

24 posted 2003-07-23 12:06 PM

Thanks Gemma

Thanks Nancy lol

Scorpio maybe you didnt get it but thanks

krawdad is there a better way? being good has only got me hell down here

thanks dertah

Susan thats my fear too...voiiiiiiiiid

Thanks Angela

James the first is heaven the second is a crock in my opinion

Thanks Martin

thanks vandana

Thanks Bill aren't most of us

Kaoru means alot to me..nice socks lol

Yer a doll Maree, hugs..grope..oops that slipped it wasn't me i swear to Dog

Thanks jason slipped in there as i was replying

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-23-2003 12:08 AM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

25 posted 2003-07-23 12:43 PM

This was awesome.SOmetimes you have to push forward instead of waiting.I enjoyed this.
angelblueyes

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

26 posted 2003-07-23 01:43 AM

That was Powerful.
So few words but imagery bled into me.

Jai

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