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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-15 10:02 PM

Nothing
matters much..
not much
matters
anymore.

Things
don't fit
puzzled,
they don't
create a
big picture.

Falling zero..
zero
falls on
negative soil.

Slip of dress
casual caress,
lips painted to impress.
Like a thumbprint,
or snowflake.

Siren
circles diagram
of bodies approaching
midnight.

Leaves stir around
the skyline,
devouring
the streetlights.

This bitter kiss
came no closer to touching love.
And nothing much
matters
anymore.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-15-2003 10:02 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-07-15 10:45 PM

A unique presentation...very you.
There was a trace of depressed anguish here, set well in clear images.
Well done.
Hugs, and the dawning of new day. TD

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-07-16 12:07 PM

I loved the flow here Kaoru!

everything okay?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-16 12:18 PM

lips painted to impress.
Like a thumbprint,
or snowflake.

you have a way..surreal style

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-16 02:42 AM

I'm...Falling....slowly and gradually in love with the words that corrode my mind. snow...impress...caress....matters..no more...*swoons..* j/k You have this style that is so unique it allures me instantly into reading it.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-21 08:18 PM

i know

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-21 08:20 PM

Lovely...reads so smoothly...much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-07-21 08:43 PM

Your style marries the mood of this wonderfully. Surreal is a good word to describe. Sort of that depressed detachment--like seeing the world underwater.

Enjoyed, lady.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2003-07-21 08:59 PM

Cool style.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-07-21 09:02 PM

one of my favorites that you've written

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2003-07-21 09:07 PM

Inspite of the short phrasing...this is a very descriptive write...

believe in what your heart feels...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-07-21 10:59 PM

This is a lovely write, Kaoru.
I enjoyed the read.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

12 posted 2003-07-22 12:07 PM

Very nice...

Detached

~wranx

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-07-22 12:09 PM

Kaoru, this is a very interesting
poem. I liked

Hugs

Ethel

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

14 posted 2003-07-22 01:34 AM

sweet!!!!!!!!

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