Open Poetry #27 |
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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
You are the sun that shines in my eyes You are my first thought when I wake You are my each and every sigh You are the reason my heart does ache You are the wind in my hair You are my blood in my heart You are my friend thats never there You are the distance keeping us apart You are the tears I cry when Im alone You are my teddy I hold so tight You are the one I will never get to call my own You are my darkness at night You are the pillow I rest my head on You are the flame that burns inside of me You are the shoulder I dont have to cry on You are the every feeling I hide from you, but you dont see You are the rain that falls on my face You are the one who infested my head You are the one who makes my heart race Do you still notice that you are my world? |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A beautiful poem, with an ache to it. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
"......." is all I have to say. The feeling you described put into words..was vivid. The very same feelings I've felt and am currently feeling. Nice to know i'm not the only one. Keep writing... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like a greeting card...very nice |
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