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Open Poetry #27

Desires

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-07-14 10:52 PM

Desires

Tonight I close my
Tear filled eyes
I see you clearly in my mind
I say your name
As I think of you
With Desires of seeing you
In my dreams

"Who am I? Why am i here?" Admiral James Stockdale

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-14 11:00 PM

So sad, tonight..

beautiful, still.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-07-15 12:04 PM

Lovely and sad. I hope your dreams give pelasure.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-16 02:26 AM

Hey...it's kaoru. Sup! Anyhow uh.....the poem was neat and everything...it just seemed cliched.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-16 02:28 AM

Experiment with a deeper analysis on the feeling of sadness. Compare it to something that other people can understand..but at the same time only your mind truly knows the feeling.

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