A shape poem . . . reposted for Honeybee's challenge

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Open Poetry #27

A shape poem . . . reposted for Honeybee's challenge

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-07-15 03:10 PM

~
**oh my**
*yellowed moon*
in clear night's sky
starts low 'n rises high
carries so many a lie
from an ancient eye
*maybe to satisfy*
**a sigh**
~

I don't often do this, but it seemed timely to repost at Honeybee's request, full moon and all.
Kraw'

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (07-15-2003 03:13 PM).]

Eliza
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since 2002-11-18

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1 posted 2003-07-15 03:11 PM

Very timely, Sir. She will so enjoy
your format, your color...and your words.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-15 03:13 PM

Krawdad, I like this. I'm gonna go try to do one....besides a rictameter.

Hugs
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-07-15 03:14 PM

very nice *s...

M

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-15 05:08 PM

awesome Krawdad
sounds interesting . . .
you did a magnificient job
and stood up to the challenge superbly
xxoo

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-07-15 05:20 PM

sigh sigh

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

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Ohio, USA

6 posted 2003-07-15 05:41 PM

I like your shape poem!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2003-07-15 08:17 PM

carries so many a lie
from an ancient eye
*maybe to satisfy*
**a sigh**
_________________

You met the challenge well...I love this!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-07-15 08:51 PM

Great write as usual Kraw post more damn you grins

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2003-07-16 01:32 AM

cool

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-07-16 08:42 AM

Well I am sure glad that you did as it reminded me to get into the archives and read you again

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-07-16 01:22 PM

Satisfying indeed.
Truly, a gem of a poem~

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

12 posted 2003-07-17 12:39 PM

Thank you all for stopping in.
Glad you like, it was fun to do.

And Aenimal?
Cover my paycheck and I'm here all day, man.

Kraw'

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