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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Crossing the verrazano for the call back home, i cannot choose my sky today as it's already claimed me, life and death interwoven, morphed into a solitary cloud, somber views match somber moods, reality hovers overhead dense as fog, over cityproject grey that scrapes the sky, even the towering weeds that line the shoulder of the Belt won't lure me to Kansas today, as they aren't looking like stalks of golden wheat right now, i don't want to click the ruby red slippers, i dont want to be Dorothy in the bible belt today, i just want to play in OZ, for a while * the belt is a parkway connecting NJ to BrooklynNY* [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-14-2003 11:31 PM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
wow - do I feel this way right now I'd rather be anywhere but here today Busch Gardens - Hawaii - California - just about anywhere if I could feel carefree happy & loved awesome write dear poet lead me to the yellow brick road |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
awesome write dear poet lead me to the yellow brick road i think youre getting close............ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i cannot choose my sky today as it's already claimed me, ============================ wow I love that line's intend... very cool poetess inked.  Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Yes yes these lines: i cannot choose my sky today as it's already claimed me, - these lines God remind me of Morrison: "Awake, shake dreams from your hair, my child , my pretty one. Choose the day, the day's divinity . . . first thing you see . . ." I do know that city grey Michele brilliant xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
somber views match somber moods, reality hovers overhead dense as fog, over cityproject grey that scrapes the sky, You are a wonderful poet Michele and such a babe! ah haha! It's all true though! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool thinking here, thanks for sharing...always love the way you say stuff |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I think I have been there before as I have taken the trip. Wouldnt mind being in Kansas, bible belt and all. OZ land of dreams and make believe. Is OZ a weds? |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
sounds like you have been to OZ if I make it there could ya show me around - lol came back across this & felt it needed to breathe As always I look forward to more of your poetry Mike . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'd settle for Paris...and some wine, women and song and dancing and kisses..James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wouldn't it have been a silly thing if Dorothy pleaded to stay? Nah. Great write! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
 A voice of honesty |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
lay it on ya? ... sounds kinda kinky, but uh....I guess I can relate. I'd prefer being in Heaven then here. |
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