Open Poetry #27 |
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Stills In Several |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
Oh what laughs, what fish hook gaffs, what bubbled amber glass, what time to think what time to drink, my god what time to pass. A cameo, a boat to row, canoes I once drowned in, they're paddled addled, broken sunk, and left and wrapped in tin. ©2003 by icebox |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful work...love your style of writing! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "my god what time to pass." indeed! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Great stills! I can't imagine having that kind of time to enjoy anymore...what am I doing wrong? haha But what great memories. You could set these lines to the tune of Dylan's Gates of Eden. But you'd have to write 12 more verses or so. :-) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
YES! I love this! Very cool write, my friend. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this, too. Awesome ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Goodness sakes, how do you manage to speak such hard truths with your tongue in cheek? One more round of applause for you!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always in awe of you...yeah |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Enchantress ~ I am glad you enjoy it. Thank you for telling me. Martie ~ Hi my dear friend, thank you for reading my poem. Kahlil ~ Time is only linear in theory; in reality, it expands and compresses. It is an old druid trick: if every second is a minute and every minute is an hour, every flower lives its season in a single afternoon. *smile* vlraynes ~ *smile* Thank you for taking time to tel me. Kaoru ~ Thank you for reading my poem and for taking time to comment. I am glad you liked it. BluesSerenade ~ Oh, it's easy! Really. I had my jaw broken when I was young and there is a little gap for my tongue. *grin* passing shadows ~ *smile* There are times when I think your work is going to make me weep blood; now THAT is awesome! Most times, I can not get any closer to some of those feelings than to read them in your writing. Thank you for reading my poem and for taking time to comment. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
(N)icebox, very (N)ice |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! I just love your writings. Hugs, Marti |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Icebox: thank you for that message...I envisioned your eyes twinkling....~k~ |
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