Open Poetry #27 |
We Could Let Go |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We could let go. We could belong to something less than the confines of this love. There is always more to see with our eyes closed. We are not hindered by the blindness of sight. We could let go within this darkness. We could surrender to the thousand little deaths the day presents. Only nothing will ever last forever. And even this...seeks something to become. We could be this - We could be the rain drying in the instant death of land. We could be the drop...that reaches for the ocean. We could nourish...or we could drown. We could let go. And find out who we really are. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"We could let go. And find out who we really are." Yes..we could let go...but it is a frightening feeling...although exciting, right? Much enjoyed Eric! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Only nothing will ever last forever And even this...seeks something to become." --so profound. Lovely write, Dear Eric! As the saying goes: "Let go and let God!" EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And that is exactly what I am doing, letting go to find out who I am! The release comes through my words. Gee, I was just talking about this to someone this morning...are you reading minds or eaves dropping? LOL Love this, Eric. Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...we could be this... oh yes... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ericc - yes, to let go and find out who we really are. Thanks for writing these words... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Eric - this is just brilliant you have no idea how much this means to me We could nourish...or we could drown. We could let go. And find out who we really are. xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc "We could let go. And find out who we really are." I think the only way to belong is to be able to let go. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The surrender is the most difficult part Very romantic, gave me shivers. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Eric, your outstandingly beautiful poetry increases always my energy vibrations ... We could let go ... could we? And if I was the ocean I would know you as the little drop joining me ... and if I was the Earth I would feel the spot where you fell ... we are the drop and the ocean the drop and the Earth we are the dancing molecules and the Universe, infinitely small and infinitely vast. Forever to last. That's who we are. I love you. Margherita [This message has been edited by Margherita (07-12-2003 01:43 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn...a piece that could be a song |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
your graceful words always reach the pit of my stomach. when we have to let go, it is so sad, but it doesnt have to mean goodbye, does it. your words help me find who i really am you know. you bring to life what is real, making the saddest of things, so beautiful. thanks ericc. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Aahhhh...dear Gem...there are no goodbyes. Our separations take place only in the mind. The heart knows only union. This is the holiest spot. Were we meet. Use the mind...but always Think...with the heart. It knows. Love, Eric |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
much needed wise words...the heart, it does know doesnt it. it makes sense when you say it. where'd ya get all your wisdom from? youre an angel! Thankyou more than you can know friend. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Eric The approach to finding who we are...all those questions but for a silent answer..good muse here [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-12-2003 08:13 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is so good. You are a very wise person. Thanks for sharing your wisdom with us. Hugs Ethel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is stunning in its wisdom and beauty. Sandra |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
"Use the mind...but always Think...with the heart. It knows." -Eric. Such beautiful poem for sunday morning. Wow poet, you write with the ink of your heart. Beautiful... Hugs, Etain. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
...in this letting go we found waiting patiently our arrival the Universe. Love, Angela |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
truly, a wonderful peice! |
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