Open Poetry #27 |
Spiral Staircase |
El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Life is a spiral staircase, Which ascends up towards the sky— Every day we take a step, Learning more as time goes by. Sometimes I want to sit down, And not go any higher! But always a helping hand Has come to bless and inspire... But this staircase has no rails! There’s nothing to hold on to! Could there be a guiding hand— Lord, am I to hold to you? There are tears in my eyes As I’ve come to realize The step I must take today, Has to take me far away— And my friend, it divides us, I must say goodbye for now— But, my friend, I’ll be around, Though my hand is to the plow, I’ll see you on a higher step, When God binds us once again, If not here on earth someday, Then in the New Jerusalem! |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
sometimes i think about life like you described...but i always felt a step back was a moment when i was falling back...i try to think of any step I take as a step towards self discovery.. good write Mike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...I usually think of life as taking a journey on a path...and sometimes we walk on the right path and sometimes we get on the wrong path...and sometimes we come to a junction and these are times of choices and hopefully we'll make the right choice...James |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
For some reason, Jacob's Ladder came to mind when I read your poem. I enjoyed your words. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this write very much,,,, A voice of honesty |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Life... A journey untold until you experience the moment the time the thought the feeling the sight the touch the notion the clearing of everything around till your sound with yourself The whole galaxy around you..and you the center..not me..but you. The created deserving of the creator's love..constantly seeking him. |
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