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Open Poetry #27

Circulation of a Memory

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-14 05:08 PM

Blonde hair wrapped
around finger,
purple.
Blue,
red vein
crumbles like paper
airplanes..fly,
this great design
of Phoenix.
Green grass follows
me..mocking crackling
pavement
below feet.
Blonde hair
wrapped around finger,
circulation of
a memory.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-07-16 06:42 PM

you have such a distinct flow to your words.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

2 posted 2003-07-16 07:24 PM

distance like weight
holding me down
farther
taking from me light
stop
remember the way I flow inside
creeping onto you
swooning you
your heart wooing
spirits...
collide.

*shrugs...tried to steal her style and failed miserably.*

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-07-16 10:20 PM

nicely written,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2003-07-16 11:21 PM

You have such a unique style and it blows ME away. You are good. Real Good.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

5 posted 2003-07-17 12:11 PM

Another good poem...your writing style is pretty unique and intriguing.

Anwaar

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-07-17 09:32 AM

enjoyed

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