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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-07-14 04:29 PM

“Witch!”
You cry with shrill, frightened voice
Do you imagine insult?
Make no mistake
It’s pride I take

A craft I learned
With blood and tears
Take a bow, now you’re the weak one
For you helped hone my skills
On the flesh of your mind and emotions

You lash out no more
For you finally understand
The power I derive
Comes from the hate you expel
And now you tremble with unbridled fear

So take your pathetic shell of self
You were never any more
My spell wasn’t to hurt
But rather to show you
For exactly what you are

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-07-14 04:31 PM

Damnnn Susan . . .
have I ever told you how much I LOVE your writing? LOL

Goodness can feel your veins popping out in this one
awesome writing indeed
xxoo

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-07-14 04:33 PM

(chuckling) remind me not to get on your bad side would you????

nicely done.. strong imagery and wording to convey the emotions and to draw the reader in...

I enjoyed

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2003-07-14 04:33 PM

This is "GRADE A" schtuff gal...liked the write!!!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-07-14 04:36 PM

Thank you!! All of you!

What would I do without the encouragement?

Ron, you don't have it in you to get on my bad side...

Susan

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-07-14 05:00 PM

You rang?

smile...

my my, what the full moon does reveal!!!

giggling, and actually you have MY full admiration. Wish I'd written this one m'self.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-07-14 05:04 PM

Karen,

Thank you for the compliment. There are times when I do feel like a witch...and I just don't feel bad about it..LOL...actually, I like it....

Susan C.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-07-14 05:18 PM

Excellent write Susan...much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-07-14 05:20 PM

Awesome write

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-07-14 05:22 PM

*smiling at Karen's reply*...now how did
I know I'd find her here? LOL

I enjoyed this one, Susan...nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2003-07-14 05:49 PM

Now that it is out and loose in the world, I hope the evening rests gently on your soul.

...nmaste...

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

11 posted 2003-07-14 05:53 PM

great imagery

Mike

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-07-14 06:00 PM

So mote it be!

Gosh, yer beautiful when yer ire's up! LOL

Great write, Susan!

Huggums,
Linda

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