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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Sitting Waiting For that turn of phrase That thought That word That starts the pen in motion Attempting to define a nebulous notion Much as the Ancients must have When sifting through that field of stars Connecting the dots in the black of night Endeavoring to define the unfathomable Staring into the sky inside my eyelids I try to find an inspiration Within the bright spots displayed there The Warrior The Lover The Artist Always careful to avert my gaze From the empty places in between For there is where I’ll find the topics That I cannot yet visit And so, I remain Sitting Waiting |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sitting Waiting For that turn of phrase That thought That word That starts the pen in motion" Seems I've been doing this a lot lately... well said...yes, very well said. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Excellent write, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
See what you just came up with while you were just sitting there waiting!  Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look to the North Star always constant always giving always there tonight, when the moon is full... find it, just there... and your pen shall have new ink and your mind be filled with muse. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
For there is where I’ll find the topics That I cannot yet visit excellent |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Always careful to avert my gaze From the empty places in between For there is where I’ll find the topics That I cannot yet visit Ed, this is just beautiful. You amaze me, ya know?  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, those dark spaces and empty places - I feel them everytime I awaken. Well said, Wranx! Corinne |
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poet25 Junior Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 18PE, Canada |
An excellent read, rather inspiring in a round about way, thank you for sharing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Isn't it interesting what an inspired poem comes out of being uninspired? Sure do understand this feeling! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: amazing . . . when I was little I always used to stare at the dots and make pictures out of them in my mind . . . Ok that was weird - but you know what I mean in silent awe xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
For there is where I’ll find the topics That I cannot yet visit Ahhhhh a wonderful write m'friend, it's always a pleasure reading you. Maree  oh and keeping this. fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful write! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Hmmmmm Feels more like astronomy to my ol' bones. The dark places in the night that I am drawn to . . . But, never mind, I like this anyway. Well done, Sir. s.a.g. |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Well penned indeed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh. I've been so busy goofing off today I almost missed this'n. and whoa, YOU. chuckle-- we have to talk. Yer on my cloud again... Loved this one. I'll be back later. You have wise ways, yeti.  |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
while you never rite, your expression is addictive...very well done Mike |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Much as the Ancients must have When sifting through that field of stars Connecting the dots in the black of night Endeavoring to define the unfathomable Staring into the sky inside my eyelids I try to find an inspiration Within the bright spots displayed there" Hey, at least you got bright spots!! My eyelids aren't nearly as well decorated.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Let the universe inspire you, Ed...find your way by following the stars.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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