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After The Goodbye
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After The Goodbye |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
After The Goodbye It never matters to them how many tears you cry, after the goodbye. JamesLee July14 2003 |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Truer words have never been spoken...well done! I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
No, I suppose it doesn't. someone somewhere will care one day though right? I hope so. once again, feeling this pain right down to my toes.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, a lot said in few words...  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...Very good, enjoyed. No Goodbye is ever good in my mind...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
JM, this is beautiful. Those tears always seem to be endless, too. Is that where the saying "Cry me a river" comes from?  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no, they could care less |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I liked this alot,...and so true. Jason |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
James..profound words...and felt deeply.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
JamesMichael: It may not matter to them, but it is very important to you. Well done. Ariana |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
So true, indeed, saying so much with so little. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Ain't that the truth? Loved this one James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
James, your poem made me remember a time the words were never said!! The disappearing act if far worse than the closure. Carry on good poet~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Heh... too true unfortunately :-/ hope it gets better for you soon *hugs* ... Even though you're gone ... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Unfortunate, but true...I know this one. Hugs, ~Vicky "it is better to be a part of beauty |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
i loved this. very short and to the point. i felt your words truly i did. and it made me realize something very important. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true, and damn don't it hurt? |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is true and to the point. Tears just flow and flow. angelblueyes |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah but James, what matters is this...your tears may flow but think of the memories you will always have. Roniece you expressed yourself very well in these few words. Keep smiling Bello! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - this should be etched in stone xxoo |
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