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Open Poetry #27

She Sings..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-14 01:51 AM

She
sings..
A full moon reflects
off of the ocean.

Oh, woe,
she tenderly
picks petal from flower.
Dusts growth upon the water.

Tragic explosion as fog
envelopes island.
Fear
to flee from the sail
that has been set.

Co-exsisting with seagull,
the indescribable smell
of salt
colliding with
sealife.

Her voice
hovers
above water as
it calms the wind.
Silent, peaceful ocean,
for she
carries it..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-07-14 02:22 AM

"Her voice
hovers
above water as
it calms the wind.
Silent, peaceful ocean,
for she
carries it.."

Beautifully penned, Kaoru.
I enjoyed this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-07-14 03:20 AM

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-14 03:29 AM

Her voice
hovers
above water as
it calms the wind.
Silent, peaceful ocean,
for she
carries it..

How beautiful this is!!
Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-14 03:55 AM

this is beautiful

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

5 posted 2003-07-14 05:40 AM

This is the work of an artist, yielding brush contained in pen, and painting verbal images for our eyes to drink in. What a beautiful fluid write this is, and I very much enjoyed!

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

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